Confusing, kinda nice, and it made me pause to think about breakfast. You should get some music to play in the background so it doesn't sound so empty. I like the voice acting. Your movement could use some work, but it's a great start.
(Also it feels kinda short for an episode)
Yeah, I've never actually animated before the pilot(which I might upload later), so it's been a huge learning curve, things like timing and keyframes have been a learning process, that's why it was so short (ended up shorter WAY than what I thought). Thank you so much for the criticism and I future episodes will be better, hopefully.
I can't speak on Flipnote animations as I don't use Flipnote to animate.
However, the quality is greatly reduced by using Flipnote. You have to rely on lines to show blurs and when your pen tool makes your lines too big and not clean it doesn't look very good. I do like the fighting choreography though.
I find it funny that the doll had more detail than the child playing with it.
Since this was made last year I have no clue how much you have improved so I'll just say keep things consistent. I saw what looked to be earth and then the bottom of it exploded. "Oh, Antarctica exploded." I thought to myself as that is where the explosion happened on the drawing of the planet. Nope! It was Alaska. The story was shaky as I didn't understand what was going on. Why did the sister have a weird green potion? Why did the brother want it? The humor was ok and all in all it was an OK animation.
lol yeah i know there was a lot of mistakes on this one and i apprciate the honesty and i hope i improve in the future
"GAME GRUMPS ANIMATED: WHHHHHHY?!?!"
Pros:
-You finished the animation.
-Great color choice for scene and the character design was awesome. I liked how ghost Danny looked.
-No issues with sound
Con:
- I don't judge art styles, but I do judge animation! You use tweens for your animation and it works. Although with movements such as Danny getting hit by the arrow and falling to the ground fast enough to break the sound barrier is kinda hard to ignore. You can even use tween to animate him falling. I know how much of a pain frame by frame can be.
Conclusion:
I give it 3.5 stars
This was great! I love Game Grump animations and yours is a welcome addition to the hall of GG animations. Keep up the great work!
"Not a dog, not a cat"
Pros:
-Finished the animation ...Kinda... Maybe? It looks like a animatic so it's hard to tell.
-Great voice work and funny little ditty at the end.
-Made me smile
Cons:
-Looks incomplete.
- I don't think I'm tasting this humor properly.
Conclusion:
I give you a 2.5
Not quite complete, not quite terrible. It's a gaaaat.
"Suburban Haze"
Before I began my review I'm going to point out that I am reviewing the animation portion of this video. The music was nice, but I review animation not music. If someone from audio would like to review the music it would be much apprenticed.
Pros:
-The animation ran for the entire song and didn't end abruptly. It also looked pretty good and needed some brushing up at very few points.
-Trippy animation is hard to do and you pull it off fairly well.
Cons:
-I understand the difficulty that comes with animating people who play instruments. However practicing the movements of actual musicians helps a ton. Guitarist don't just strum over and over and they change chords with their other hand. I also listened really close and from 0:15-0:20 and the drummer isn't hitting anything yet.
Conclusion:
I give this a 3.5 out of 5
This was a big project I could tell. The amount of effort that went into this probably took some time out of meanpaul's life. The cons pretty much sum up everything I had wrong with the video. Personally I liked the music and found that the animation complimented it a certain parts (The mouth scene for example).
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