You did it! Nice work.
You did it! Nice work.
Not bad when compared to the Original.
Weeping Gremm could have put more emphasis on the lines, but it's not soulless as much as her reaction to the Succubus doesn't match up with what the original video was going for, it's supposed to be a shocked reaction, but I do like the resigned sigh she gives.
There are many factors the could have made this better, but what keeps this is the nice character design! The colors are nice and if you can merry the voice acting to the animation it will be super!
I would have like to see more breakdown poses and inbetweens and less pose to pose for this animation. The timing feels like it's cramped because of how short the meme is supposed to be and how much is happening to hit all the proper beats but all the motions can be done (But I get that this is an animation meme and those normally don't require the extra effort, just for fun stuff)
Can I say that all in all I will suggest making longer videos if you're curious why your score is so kinda below 3 (At time of typing this) I won't say it was one star but there are things to improve on.
Good luck.
This made me smile.
You worked so hard to plug every single person's links and yet I can't tell who's who in the video. :y Pretty neato
Edit: Hey! That does help! Thanks Brandy
it's in order of appearance, if that helps
Yeah I didn't want to put all of our names in the video, I always find that distracting. Like Brandy said it's in order, maybe it'd be better to include a picture of the entries in the credits next to the names.
(fix her hand when she blows the kiss.)
Edit, hands in general are trouble, but it pays dividends.
Oh crap! You red the sublime, smartass :D
Nice loop.
But which city was blown up? You gotta add one last barb pal! This is pretty great!
thanks , the entire earth was blown up.
Dude can I be in one of these? I just got ungrounded and I have a copy of flash plz dm me I can make carttoon
join the discord server and you can be apart of one of the collabs
Send me a demo reel, and if its gopd enough, ill consider it
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